by Ella_79
I mentioned this poem in the New Poem Review thread in the Poetry Forum. Please feel free to come along and join in with other poets. Welcome to Literotica! - wildsweetone (the 50% temp rating is so that it does not affect other ratings)
This is a well written and erotic piece. It makes you want to experience what's happening (or perhaps see it unfolding, depending on your preference). I enjoyed reading it very much. Well done: please write some more.