All Comments on 'Alligator cheer'

okay this is the best title of the day, and there were some really good ones!

I love the first three lines, you had me cracking up. I think you could come up with something more unique to finish off the cheer, it would be perfect. Okay, maybe it already is. Really fun.

erotically witty humor (~_~) I enjoyed your short and to the point poem <grin (chuckleboned)

And I don't mean it in a bad way! There was this 'primal' immidiate horny quality. Wanting to say (at least...) something which will run its course, even if on a second read it does not make TOTAL sense. And I do not refer to the alligator but to the fuck me later part.

we need to see more of those to - yes, clean the air from over importance - overheaviness - over cliched poems. Consider yourself comissioned!