All Comments on 'an apartment poem'

Good, but 'fridge' instead of 'frig' would make it better. No need for the hyphen in 'nightclub' either.

I gave it a five.

WOW, the only thing missing is some Depression glassware. This is pretty grim. I'm not sure if it is overplayed. A five.

Great word selection in "humanimal" and "my square robotic friend.". Not sure about "depression-variety garden" in the last line, however, because I think was well established by then. Still a five for me nonetheless.