All Comments on 'An end to a beginning'

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RhymeFairyRhymeFairyabout 18 years ago
Wowza ...

I love the poem here. Make one think, your a word wizard my friend. I feel your flow and see what your painting.

Great write !! The illustration, I think you might have used a turbulent sea ... or something like, just me.

The poem awesome !!!

More Plez ~

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Nice.

Lovely rendering ~ the illustration seem to distract from the verse somehow ~ but that's just one person's thought. The poem was lovely indeed~

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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The image of the sea invites thoughts of an infinite void.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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The image of the sea invites thoughts of an infinite void.

AmyfriendAmyfriendover 17 years ago
Very interesting...

the words are quite suggestive..

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
NO DUST MITES

no current of life. TK U MLJ LV NV

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