by PoissonSurLaLune
Gotta say I enjoyed this piece. Please forgive that I don't have any insightful technical intimations. But on a whole, this poem just kinda took me there. For a moment I was she. Well done.
Thank you for the insight.
I have been lucky enough to be told things much like this by some of the women I have known in my life. Such thoughts are very special and intimate.
Thank you for sharing.
with a little tweaking this could be a hip-hop rap. TK U MLJ LV NV