by RhymeFairy
Much better read this morning than last night after a long day; not twisting my tongue near as much but a good image nonetheless. I liked it {you think?}.
But look out RF, the Navy's in port. Batten down the hatches!!
makes this an ocean filled delight..nice one...a keeper..blue
Your poetry has excelled and your touching words still brush a soul with glides of feather laid literary flowers...your poetry...
(QUOTE) "Baptized your boat, with
dew kissed lips, of ambrosic
waves. Heavenly sails, set sail,
only to return renewed.
Getting sea legs back,
to begin anew. Anchors
Away ..."
And it was ONE hell of a ride!
very nice images of a sailors delight,
AWESOMELY DONE ! -sweet GA peaches-
Anchors away indeed. A dreamlike eroticism that wasn't at all cloying. Not easy to pull off, great read.
lol, BD