All Comments on 'Anchors Away ~'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
ghostly

This reads like a dream. Great visuals in a smooth read.

sandspike

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Much better read this morning than last night after a long day; not twisting my tongue near as much but a good image nonetheless. I liked it {you think?}.

But look out RF, the Navy's in port. Batten down the hatches!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
lots of nice phrases

makes this an ocean filled delight..nice one...a keeper..blue

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
A Pearl of a poem

Your poetry has excelled and your touching words still brush a soul with glides of feather laid literary flowers...your poetry...

sweet GA peachessweet GA peachesover 18 years ago
to thee i give the ship....

(QUOTE) "Baptized your boat, with

dew kissed lips, of ambrosic

waves. Heavenly sails, set sail,

only to return renewed.

Getting sea legs back,

to begin anew. Anchors

Away ..."

And it was ONE hell of a ride!

very nice images of a sailors delight,

AWESOMELY DONE ! -sweet GA peaches-

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
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Anchors away indeed. A dreamlike eroticism that wasn't at all cloying. Not easy to pull off, great read.

lol, BD

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