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All Comments on 'And the coming night'

by rubyslipper

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CleardaynowCleardaynowabout 10 years ago
Very nice and nicely crafted poem

I like this a lot. Very good idea progression, imagery and expression

GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureabout 10 years ago
Recommended.......

......for great imagery and subtle ambiguity. Five.

buttersbuttersabout 10 years ago
exceptional

lets my mind wander in different directions, but always brings it back to the visuals... lingers well beyond the page. shame 5's the limit, i'd have voted higher.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
*****

Five.

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