by Sex and Death
the tune your poem made when I read it. Great reading; mentioned in today's new poem reviews
Made me want to take my clothes off! Beautiful images, you played me like a well-worn harp.
I love the change in voice-- gives it a warm, gravelly edge!
Fly
I loved this read. It showed and told me all I needed
to know. sandspike
I like blues that makes the walls come tumbling down (~_~) nice write~
IM glad I read this!! love your use of dialect, something not many people do well, but you did. good work
i love this every time i read it.
i can hear the sound that's being played.
thank you for that.
wso
Couldn't hear the note but sure could feel the sound
In your words when the note was so sweetly played;
As well as the discordant sound when it was blowed out.
Nothing like the low-down sound of a blues being played on a harp. A sweet melody indeed!
'Das da sound'll make yo’ wife
wanna take 'er cloves off.'
Can you teach me that sound?