All Comments on 'And the Walls Came Tumblin’ Down'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
I liked

the tune your poem made when I read it. Great reading; mentioned in today's new poem reviews

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
mmmm

Made me want to take my clothes off! Beautiful images, you played me like a well-worn harp.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Excellent

I love the change in voice-- gives it a warm, gravelly edge!

Fly

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Blue me away

I loved this read. It showed and told me all I needed

to know. sandspike

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailalmost 18 years ago
note:

I like blues that makes the walls come tumbling down (~_~) nice write~

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Nice

Write, thanks for sharing-can ya blow it again please? :)

TT

Maria2394Maria2394almost 18 years ago
:)

IM glad I read this!! love your use of dialect, something not many people do well, but you did. good work

wildsweetonewildsweetonealmost 18 years ago
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i love this every time i read it.

i can hear the sound that's being played.

thank you for that.

wso

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

Couldn't hear the note but sure could feel the sound

In your words when the note was so sweetly played;

As well as the discordant sound when it was blowed out.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
melody

Nothing like the low-down sound of a blues being played on a harp. A sweet melody indeed!

Bill DadaBill Dadaalmost 17 years ago
^

'Das da sound'll make yo’ wife

wanna take 'er cloves off.'

Can you teach me that sound?

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