All Comments on 'Angel w/One Wing'

I love the power of the running together of the words creates. A fast current that in the end falls off a water fall of realities voice!

Hot damn~ good write!

Du~

mentioned on the Sunday reviews..

great poem and awesome sparks of thought~

I wrote a stream-of-consciousness piece once and neither the poetry forum nor the story forum would touch it. I think your images (which are excellent!!)suffer by being run into each other so quickly; had you structured this more like a traditional poem it might have read better. Thanks.

Boo

of my winged nature,

I love this piece

of art,

so deliciously painted

to the pallete of my

senses...

-sGp-

Thanks for this one - this style is so in my head and in my heart at the same time.

Tending to lean with Boo on this; it's a bit choppy in its presentation, like stream of consciousness with a brutal editor run amuck.

Unflappable..

Word run together ~ hit the mind like a Jackhammer ~ pounding out debris of meaning.