All Comments on 'Another Page'

Good poem. Only a few minor things jumped out at me. "taking

it's place" should be its. A few of your line breaks could be improved. "aged pages" is okay but those two words together don't sound that pleasant to my ear. It could just be me, though. ;) Like I said, good poem. The things I mentioned are minor. Line breaks are a real pain for many poets. Sometimes they work and other times I've smacked myself in the head trying to get mine right.

This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.

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Only one niggle, but it's probably just me, I don't think the word 'minx' fits with the rest of the flow of words. It just sounds too hard to me while the others are soft and loving.

You made your fingers mine in my mind. Thank you

to many books left unread, to many moments

left uncovered, left to share.. to many

lost pages in my own story of life-

and doesn't the snow, and the cold seem

to make ones heart want love,

sometimes in spoonfuls, and others..

like a raging storm.

I loved your words, all of them !

sGp