All Comments on 'Anti Philosophy'

and I do like it. I think I was just a little distracted by the overuse of --- dashes.

"grin the plaster of walls" Should that be off?

And this will give me something to think about for awhile:

What if ---

--- we are all a mistake

just ethereal spit,

a blob of seed dripping down

Valhalla's restroom wall ---

--- the undivine result

of an unknown deity's

premature ejaculation?

*no thermometer rating

the counterpoint between the physical and the philosophy. They enhance each other. Nice read.

*thermometer off

...loved this -- no two ways about it! (edit 'of' = 'off' in 2nd stanza.

I like the intimate conversation in and out of mind.

Distracting in places? Yes. Engaging counterpoints? Yes. There's one line that keeps making me smile...

"adlib on a coin toss"

(Which, personally, could be a great title... for this, or something else!)