All Comments on 'Apple-mint'

skillful language, might serve as an intro to a longer piece?

so I can come back and look at it again. I think it could well do with the loss of some words. nice

I read this poem yesterday and again today. In my (not so humble) opinion, it's perfect. I personally wouldn't change a thing. Your poems are so much more than erotica....

Apple-mint and other poems by O.S. are like a close-up photo, a snapshot of love on the cusp of lust. It's a five.

I like this poem a lot, but I would like it even more if you would eliminate the hyphen. It's apple mint, not apple-mint. I know, it may seem like a small thing, but it jabs at my eye, and makes me hear the word differently.

Five.

Demure's !!! Outstandin' !!

Very beautiful--are you still out there? We conversed one time or more years back. You have the gift.