All Comments on 'Archaeology'

This is powerful writing with compelling imagery. Consider submitting it to a literary magazine where it can get the attention it deserves. Read of the day for me!

Recommended in the new poems review thread on the Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum. :)

Excellent! Dense and compelling reading material here. Second Ange's comments. Love that title which would misdirect a superficial reader, yet it does tie in so well — you've just got to read a lot deeper.

Wow what a great read .. thankyou very much