All Comments on 'Artificial Illumination'

I know it is short.

It also telllls ... shows so much.

I think with this poem

one has to have *been there*

I like this, it grabbed me.

Just sayin ~

Glad to see ya back

to writing my friend ~!!!

Now ya know, we expect More ~~ grins*

remarkablue....blue

I like short poems but the real beauty here is

the title. That doesn't happen at my beach. sandspike

I agree- the title makes the poem a total different thing. Great job.

great play of title to wording!

this was well thought through and beautifully executed!

Truer words, friend.

On several levels, oh so true.

It makes one think...Well done.

A small snippet making a statement.