All Comments on 'As I Left'

Active description makes this interesting, surreal, like walking in a 'daymare'.

You've a way with words, Luc. Vivid is right.

... if I got your drift on this one, but I liked it just the same. At any rate, I created my own imagery to associate with it -- and it fits. Well done. ~Imp

I always enjoy reading your poetry, looking forward to the other submissions coming soon

Liken this to a Picasso painting or, as neo described it, a surrealistic daymare; get caught in this and you'll find yourself wanting to just get out.

Through the sea of turmoil at last a safe Harbor is in sight.