Try the free LITEROTICA WEBCAMS!

All Comments on 'as my fingers dance'

by sifn

Sort by:
Newest FirstOldest First
  • 2 Comments
ghost_girlghost_girlover 16 years ago
...

some restructure of parts of this would really add some POW to your words. I hope to read more from you.

G-G

AlepheniaAlepheniaover 16 years ago
Those last few lines...

Made me hot. Haven't gotten that from a poem in a while.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Login
Post as:
Anonymous
Login