All Comments on 'Ashes to Ashes'

Very telling, yet ... not.

Like the imagery here Bill ~!

More Please ~

Bill, as is, it is little more than a funny slogan. Develop it out, you have a scenario, and really a klller end line.

tarry over your little gems...this is one I would have written...last line was really good...am agreeing with 1201...needs developing...take care/bluerains

but still gets a five for that killer ending......don

it says all it needs to say ...quickly effectively without any extra bull...leaves you to your own images...good job buddy!

Hugs and Kisses,

T

Excellent.

Want to do something with it?

Write a book about it and use this in one of the facing pages.

Life's speedy departure ~ aided by guns.

Three years from the inception of rhe poem and the words are as fresh as in day one. No wisdom added since; no lessons learned from warnings. Just more and more insanity pours on...