All Comments on 'At Hermano's Mexican Dream Theater'

This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.

Elegant beauty and so very well written. A joy to Read!

a talented write, you could tighten this up a bit, lose the ellipses, mere distractions. I like your descriptions. good work

I perfered the Enchiladas Bruegel

Although nextime I think I'll try

the Tlacoyos de Bosch, as they looked delicious

ah for those nastursium and eel salads

with just the right amount of lime

Newton's sticky apple was a let down

but the floor show could not be beaten

I escaped with my life and a few coins in change

and this dumb t shirt

food galore ~ sexual appetite waiting to be satisfied.