by cutiepanda
What a beautiful poem, and how full of passion. You have a talent here. Keep writing!
Very erotic, love the rhymes...just a bit too long. But it was still an excellent read. I probably would've put the word "sin" or sinful" in the title. Naughty, naughty and lovin' it :-)
Very erotic, love the rhymes...just a bit too long. But it was still an excellent read. I probably would've put the word "sin" or sinful" in the title. Naughty, naughty and lovin' it :-)
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I had to come back and fix my rating. Sorry!!!! I don't like this rating system very much. Argh!