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twelveoonetwelveooneover 19 years ago
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Q. did the format get screwed on "fresh"?

You're very good

flyguy69flyguy69over 19 years ago
I like the jagged flow

The brevity of thought and form nicely conjur up the images of animalistic thought processes. Almost "anti-poetry"! Very clever, S.E.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Layout and words fit the theme.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
images revealed

Images painted with a literary brush ~ lucid and clear

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