All Comments on 'August, Western New York State'

Small clouds...darker gray

is a filler stanza, is there any other purpose for it?

End is also expected, this is a walk through from a good poet, but a walk thru

Simmer is here, winter will come, and I am idling with my words, because that is what poets do.And holy shit, I just wrote a poem thing.

Simmer is here....

A lovely summer day. A sweet mundane memory, to carry you through the cold times ahead. I enjoyed it.

One of your really good ones. The feeling and build up are lovely and the final verse is judged just so well.

marvelous word pictures ----did I forget to add " breath-takin'" as well ? 5-ed .

...worthy of hanging over any mantelpiece

Beautiful imagery