All Comments on 'Autoerotica'

but resolved and strong

Very nice

erotic and thoughtful, drowsy dreaming

Fit so well with what is going on and what you're thinking

Thank you

I liked the restraint you showed with this one, the inward look at sexuality and masturbation, and the sudden turn you took towards darkness. A bit of sad intrigue at the end, the climax clouded by something, something profoundly wrong. An intensely intimate poem... well done.

I wasn't sure where you were going, but I enjoyed the short journey. Keep up the good work and I look forward to your stories. F.