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by Erotic Reverie

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sacksackover 18 years ago
flows very well....

and it didn't seem like you were "trying too hard" for the rhymes! Excellent!

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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An erotic reverie indeed;

of closeness and sharing

and being one with the other...well done.

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
nice poem

I don't know how it tetters on the erotic meter but it certainly has a sensual flow ...nice read...thanks

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