All Comments on 'AWOL'

I mean, I'd be pissed if someone wrote this about my husband.

Strong feelings clearly and well expressed.

I have just read 'Figuring it out' & thought I would comment on this first. You did not deserve your 2 score and you certainly did not deserve the anonymous comment. Odd - we do not usually get those in the poetry sections.

A fair few poems appear about feelings over someone who has left us (and it has happened to us all). This is greatly superior to the vast majority - unlike many you do not sink into self pity and self justification. A good poem.

The last two lines really made me sit up and think.