All Comments on 'Baby I'm With You'

to a mountain hideaway. TK U MLJ LV NV

Whether at the Seashore or the mountains ~ Baby I'm with you.

ZZZZzzzzz. . . .

of emotion you brought

to mind, but one lasting

thought...you left,

sacrifice.

5*+ ! -sGp-

...hits you where you live. Very moving. A powerful expression of love.

And here is yet another way to say, "I love you."

and the last 2 lines certainly leaves the piece heavy in feeling.......nicely done.......don

Beautiful free verse poem. Love it!

nice to see your work again..guess you'll miss the surf ..I would...thanks..blue

Beautiful and romantic,

lovely writing,

lovely piece,

i loved it.

thanks.

~ J

this is an openly warm, romantic beauty of a poem. I love the rhythm you set and your word choices are virtually perfect. And the ending...sigh.... :)