All Comments on 'back-handed schoolyard picture'

by demure101

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DawnJ over 11 years ago

I see so many possibilities here

Whatever the intent, there's not even lust in this encounter, is there? You use such words as "gash", "inflicted", and "stabbing" to depict an aborted sex act that must have been unpleasant, to say the least. And he's feeling ashamed, to boot! It's not just youth that's wasted on the young, is it, and you show that very well here!