All Comments on 'Backroads'

by The_Fool

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
good

Well crafted with a well developed metaphor. Like this.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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A drink and a good cigar; nothing's as easily handled and fixed as that calming pair. Leave life's tribulations to solve themselves.

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Sitting..

in a dim and dismal bar sipping on whiskey and revisiting the past.. nicely done.

tungtied2utungtied2uabout 17 years ago
Your poem has been mentioned

in today's New Poem Reviews. Fooly, you make me want to pull up a stool next to you and order the same. I love these lines:

I round the ash of my cigar

With greater deliberation than I’ve used

When making many life decisions.

Great stuff...thanks for the read.

Maria2394Maria2394about 17 years ago
you've set the scene

and you do it so well. I agree with the "well_crafted" comments , I can only agree and say that I enjoyed this very much :)

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
1ST ONE IS GOOD

the 2nds always better. TK U MLJ LV NV

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