All Comments on 'Bad sport'

by tungtied2u

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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
THE MORAL DONT WHERE YOU EAT

should be #1 in enforcement. TK U MLJ LV NV

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Typical

Go into almost any poorly run Sports Bar in town and encounter the real life situation of which this poet writes.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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The owner's focus is on the wrong line; and soon he'll have all of nothing.

sacksackover 19 years ago
very well written!

offbeat idea, lovingly presented! Just great!

flyguy69flyguy69over 19 years ago
Clever

I like the haiku ending!

Maria2394Maria2394over 19 years ago
:)

I could picture the whole scene, you did a great job, and I dont feel sorry for the owner at all, he should teach them gals to count!!

one thing, you could probably leave off the two words-- ""of offspring""

and it would feel a bit better :)

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