by tungtied2u
Go into almost any poorly run Sports Bar in town and encounter the real life situation of which this poet writes.
The owner's focus is on the wrong line; and soon he'll have all of nothing.
I could picture the whole scene, you did a great job, and I dont feel sorry for the owner at all, he should teach them gals to count!!
one thing, you could probably leave off the two words-- ""of offspring""
and it would feel a bit better :)