All Comments on 'Ballerina'

...whenever my "kid" brother calls and says "I'm stopping by the club", I usually join him and make sure I have ones and twenties in my pocket.

"Ballerina" is a fantasy fixation I know a little too well!

The candor combines with esoteric language to make this a very strong poem.

but I liked it. Lustily erotic. I don't think the ballet will ever be the same again.

I always thought ballet was sexy, but this part took my breath---

I crack open

your painted smile ?

but you still point your toes

as you come.

excellent, I mean really! :)

This was a beautiful, erotic image for a poem. Well done! I'll definitely read all of your submissions.