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Click hereLady neighbors gather
into a slow swarm of annoyance.
With unswattable blue hair
and fly-wing skin, they buzz
about that man of hers.
"Front porches are for covered chairs
and plants tucked into their pots."
Nudity should be proper:
beneath a robe,
before coffee.
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copyright d. dixon
2008
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I enjoyed the erotic metaphor of coffee and the realism of the romance of a date at a coffee shop. Thank you for sharing. :)
begotten of the Town Crier via The Old Lamplighter. TK U MLJ LV NV
is not nearly as interesting since you have been gone. I miss you sweet Evie.
Proper nudity and nude gossip, what a great combination. Improper nudity is so much more fun.
read it, enjoyed it --reread---reread---studied it and savored the gossip image. didn't like your using "their" and "surely." determined that your probaly a hell of a lot smarter then me. i'm still learning, and i learn when i read your writing. nice piece---well done..
read it, enjoyed it --reread---reread---studied it and savored the gossip image. didn't like your using "their" and "surely." determined that your probaly a hell of a lot smarter then me. i'm still learning, and i learn when i read your writing. nice piece---well done..
a poet in the truest sense of the word. You take ordinary situations and make them poetic. I have always loved your work .
The last three lines sum up middle class views so perfectly.
I loved it.