All Comments on 'Be My Hero'

by theoncomingstorm

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CleardaynowCleardaynowabout 10 years ago
I like this by far the best of your recent poems

There is byplay between the man as hero and you with your view of your weaknesses that gives the poem that extra dimension to bring it alive.

Personally (and I suspect it is true for others) I find it hard to connect with a poem that is single tone e.g. it is solely about how much the writer loves or hates someone or himself/herself – however heartfelt and sincere the poem may be. I find that such a poem lacks perspective or context.

This poem does have context and perspective and is a much better read for me.

Oldbear63Oldbear63about 10 years ago
I agree with Clearday's comments, Little One.

And love to see you more positive.

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