All Comments on 'beach music'

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twelveoonetwelveooneabout 13 years ago
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a 5,

but goes from the ridiculous

I’m lost in melting lips

and pumping hips,

and mesmerized by tight grips

to the sublime

I am a bleached seashell –

inside, there is only the sound of you.

fridayamfridayamabout 13 years ago
I just love

the rhythm of your lines.

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
MUSIC OF THE SHORE

with a crescendo of scurriers. TK U MLJ LV NV

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