Becoming One

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Your fingers touch
Every part of me
Body and soul
Your needy whisper
Makes me shiver
And I moan your name
Sliding over me
You look at me
I can feel the hunger
Our bodies merge
You’re inside of me
In more ways than one

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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
TOUCHING SOULS NEED NO COMMUIQUES

our minds leave it asunder. TK U MLJ LV NV

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Another..

beautiful poem.. well done and thank you for the nice poem.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Like those last two lines (I think it would be better without the 'of'). Again, what distracts is the lack of punctuation.