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by lipsofanangel

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Like those last two lines (I think it would be better without the 'of'). Again, what distracts is the lack of punctuation.

AmyfriendAmyfriendover 17 years ago
Another..

beautiful poem.. well done and thank you for the nice poem.

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
TOUCHING SOULS NEED NO COMMUIQUES

our minds leave it asunder. TK U MLJ LV NV

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