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by Bill Dada

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bluerainsbluerainsover 14 years ago
I read

this in one long breath..the words flowed well and I enjoyed the images...

bluerains

Levitating_BedLevitating_Bedover 14 years ago
A ticklish ricochet

all around the inside of my head...

Your words are always like a gun fired in the hall of mirrors made of bulletproof glass.

EroticOrogenyEroticOrogenyover 14 years ago
interesting

I liked the images in the first part especially

vrosej10vrosej10over 14 years ago
~

I am deeply perplexed by this poem and enjoyed it immensely. This one is gunna stick with me a while, always an enjoyable thing.

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
BEING DRAGGED THROUGH AN ALLEY

of mud, sludge and dust. TK U MLJ LV NV

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