All Comments on 'beggar's autumn'

The plight of a begger in Autumn told in verse. An air of melancholy seems to hang over each verse. Well Written!

just kidding...I do like it...especially these lines:

i beg a bit in the afternoons

and reciprocate

their lack of sympathy

That was great! I get increasingly irritated with poets

who turn their backs to every thing except "beauty" and "love", as if they don't have windows in their homes. There come your poem which knows that this distinction is arbitrary. Beauty coulld be found in the midst of every situation, and real life can't be ignored for poetry to be real!

And poetry can be found in anything, all you need do is look.

A begger relates matter of factly the trials of trying to survive in an uncaring world.

the holidays emit despair. TK U MLJ LV NV