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jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
Once again...

I am amazed at your phrasing... so intriguing. Excellent poem... mirror as time travel - wonderful. "deep as shallow heaven." inspired ending. Very good.

jim : )

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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An intriguing look at and comparison of a mirror and water; not always an easy poet to grasp. Took a couple reads to really enjoy the flow of words here.

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Timely

Mirrors have an innate honesty that can't be denied. What you see is what's there.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,500 poems.

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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
ACCORDING TO SOME

mirrors are leaks between spaces. TK U MLJ LV NV

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