Belonging

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Too long I linger
in the lovely
Lit erotic garden

is it any wonder, though?

when my heavy handed pen
bleeds me
exposing my deficiencies,
self-imposed inadequacies
and maims my spirit
until worthless
and deformed

a flawless flower lifts me
needs me
complements my poetry,
inspires creativity
names my beauty
until hope
is restored

transcendent moment
soul redemption

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16 Comments
tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
SEEKING APPROVAL

allows one the freedom to be wary. TK U MLJ LV NV

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,500 poems.

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duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Interesting take...

Sometimes I doubt that I'm a Genius ~ but then I'm often wrong.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Exquisite!

The Lit Garden filled with erotic delights awaits only the muse to make it so.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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The curse of creative folk

To look within and judge

Too harshly;

Don't blame the muse

For self-inflicted pain

Pick up the pen - the muse forgives easily.

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