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Click hereI went for a walk today
to enjoy the cooling weather.
As I strolled along the path
I chanced upon a feather.
What a lovely thing, says I
small and slim and blue.
So I paused to pick it up
and take it home to you.
You were there when I came in
and what should I see?
You’d found a feather of your own
and brought it home to me.
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,500 poems.
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As a guy that slowly learned after having screwed up one too many relationships, it's not the feather that's important--it is the remembering and thinking of her that is so important.
Cute. And so unlike what I normally find here. Kind of enjoyable, even. Tnx.
in ya huh...very nice...simple and light...luved it..bluerains
Somewhat reminiscent in sound and style to the work of Emily Dickinson. I liked this quite a lot. The title, though, seems cliché, but of course, that could just be me.
Overall, good work.
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