All Comments on 'Black Girl'

open her up and see whats inside, TK U MLJ LV NV

except for societies mores, please yourself, TK U MLJ LV NV

Soft and warm but with the sizzle of passion underneath.

A more romantically sensuous than hard edge erotic piece. I saw Eve's review on this and I see what she means about some spots needy a tweak. I think, for example, that in the next to last line that, "plant me deep" is almost predictable; I'd leave out the pronoun and just have it read, "plant deep," but that's just me.

I liked the sensuality which coexisted here with the love that clearly came across...perhaps more like adoring.