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Put on the cloak of invisibility

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Take off the cloak
Make an entrance
Dazzle and bedazzle
Shine your light
Smile through it all

You’re still just blank though
Your cloak is still on
They don’t see you
They never will

Why?
Because to them
You’re just and always will be

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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
A CHANGE OF ENVIRONMENT

a new dress, hairdo, and makeover, TK U MLJ LV NV

AmyfriendAmyfriendover 17 years ago
Very different.....

I get the feeling that you were just 'going through the motions' ...serving an obligation that you had to be there.. but yet no one acknowledges your presence.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Intriguing approach!

I liked this different way of composing. The Blank Blank Blank seems to somehow fit the situation described in this poem. Interestingly different!

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Psychological invisibility's far more insidious

And deadly than any physical possibility.

CindersglasslipperCindersglasslipperalmost 18 years agoAuthor
To Avid, Anonymous and Unregistered reader

To Avid, Anonymous and Unregistered reader

Whilst I appreciate your support and criticism of Blank, it was however named aptly “Blank” for a reason. The word ‘blank’ as boring and uninteresting a word as it is, was also chosen for exactly that reason. The reason behind ‘blank’ being used three times, is one of a personal nature, one in which I refuse to make comment on, in such a public forum. However I’m sure that if you contact me we can discuss the merits of using the word blank three times..

Cinderella’s Glass Slipper

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