All Comments on 'Blind Date'

by MickNasty

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WickedEveWickedEveover 15 years ago
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The rhyme certainly isn't overpowering. It's subtle and that really works in the poem's favor. There are some very good lines. Overall, the poem is really good. I've already said that you have potential. I think your poetry will keep getting better.

unpredictablebijouunpredictablebijouover 15 years ago
this is one case

in which I didn't mind the rhyme at all. It gives the piece a certain grace. Besides, it's a really fun piece. Nicely done.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
WILL HE OR WONT I

those decescions leave one high and dry, TK U MLJ LV NV

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