All Comments on 'Blue Afternoon'

I was intrigued through 11 lines and then confused. Unless I'm still confused, I think I would have ended it with

inane/same old things that render me half asleep.

disagree with GM, the great escape

without a cape

not sure of the title, strikes me as a little too so-so, but

this line is great

dances a tango made of repetitions.