tagNon-Erotic PoetryBlue Revelations I

Blue Revelations I

bybluerains©

Blue Revelations verse 1
touching your darkness
you avert my stare
I unfold obscene
thoughts in your mind
yet, you blink and bind...
you want me to show you
how to break the frame
of your indigo glass
as your clenched body
stumbles in murky gaze

would you be astonished
to feel lanced wounds
of knowing cut flowers never bloom
Do you want me to say I’m
sorry for breaking the
crystal madness
hiding your looking glass tomb
and could we both lament
unsheathing the sword...
draining its ravin
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