All Comments on 'Body Jazz'

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jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
Such wonderful sounds here...

wonderfully accented with the internal rhyme, end rhyme and a dab of linked rhyme at the start. All deftly managed into an excellent musical flow. This poem would be great as an audio poem... the poem is audio. Great work...

jim : )

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
WOW

Such a peace of art!

I love erotic fiction its so... beautifull. It is not pornographic, its yet much more... its art!

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
INSIDE OUTSIDE ALL AROUND THE CIRCLE

the wetness dries on itself. TK U MLJ LV NV

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