by JazzDreams
wonderfully accented with the internal rhyme, end rhyme and a dab of linked rhyme at the start. All deftly managed into an excellent musical flow. This poem would be great as an audio poem... the poem is audio. Great work...
jim : )
Such a peace of art!
I love erotic fiction its so... beautifull. It is not pornographic, its yet much more... its art!
the wetness dries on itself. TK U MLJ LV NV