All Comments on 'Botany'

I enjoyed this. -Curiouswife

good old Botany, the science of plants; the branch of biology that deals with plant life. You merged it into your poem quite well, thanks.

good old Botany, the science of plants; the branch of biology that deals with plant life. You merged it into your poem quite well, thanks.

has been mentioned in the new poem reviews thread

economy of words and conciseness of imagery. Some fun wordplay here. That last stanza feels a bit weak compared to the rest of the poem, would perhaps tighten it a little.

Very nice introduction to a feel of poignancy or perhaps fear of loss with that last stanza.