All Comments on 'Bramblewood Musing'

that the little garden you write of is online...? interesting poem, to say the least, good work

has been mentioned in Tuesday's reviews.

oh bull shit, it's right up my alley. I liked it for it

covered the bases without stopping to wave to the crowd.

It flowed well and had great images for me.

One question: do the petals entwine the thickets, or v.v.? "...thickets/entwining nesting petals..."

i liked it best of your 3 today / i understand 'crane' was totally different, like being in the science lab, and to tell you the truth i'm not sure how i feel about the final product / i have a feeling 'crane' is not a completed project yet /

By far the best I've read today.

Nice job. ;-)

A Secret Garden this is not;

Too many thorns n tears.

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