All Comments on 'Breaking The Bonds'

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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A very good piece with much to commend it

Foremost is its untapped potential that could make this

So much better with careful manipulation

Could have an emotional firestorm building up to sublime joy.

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