by My Erotic Trail
like Buddha likes toying with you or is it more like "Wax On, wax off?" hehe thanks for the giggles!
TT
and witty, and
A good story is always worth telling
Did you find your ice skates?
For a moment I thought that it reminds me of ‘breaking bread’ with a friend (or an enemy, to turn him/her into a friend) but then I thought: Nah, not with the Buddha. Turns out I was closer than I suspected, as this Buddha is more into teaching lessons –little bit the hard way; mental challenges even teasing. All I guess on the long, even freezing road to enlightenment…
I felt like wicked eve on the style (it did sound more like a story broken down by lines), but it never bothered me a bit. (Plus I have seen the reception to stories of this scope in the story section). Most importantly, you turned what could have been “a horrible terrible no good very bad day” into a humorous fun and mindful tale. And that does sound very much like an encounter with a Buddhist spirit.
on the second read through [[What is it you are doing?" He broke the ice]] and thought it quite ironic showing more of your wonderful sense of humor...now why can I see you out there using a flame thrower instead of shoveling?
is mentioned on today's review...great images...and soulful words...blue
More of a story with line breaks than a poem--at least in some areas.
You chose a good poem for inspiration.
p.s. Good line: "where he sat, like a wet tongue on a flag pole"