All Comments on 'Breather'

and to compost pile returned, TK U MLJ LV NV

Perfect fit between words and illustration; trolly knows not wherefrom he {or it} speaks.

I loved the "drifted through the room" line enclosed in smoke shown in the illustration that gave it a mystical look and thereby enhanced the meaning. The verse and picture are indeed inseparable. Top Notch.

Pretty, but how does this qualify as "poetry?"

of words and image being inseparable! Brilliant, Liar.

This one's a winner!

....Of well written words!

Thanks for the smile;)

Damn near perfect

it made me think of a whoosh of air , mixed with " her' perfume and yet

she's no where to be seen.

Nice piece

tightly woven words wrapped into the perfect picture. This I like!

~Syn